Can you edit this poorly worded quote from a sports story?
"Brooke Heike said she fell out of favor with Sue Guevara immediately after the coach was hired in 2007."
The school this involves is U of Michigan.
Brooke Heike said she immediately fell out of favor with Sue Guevara after the U of Michigan hired the coach in 2007.
Can "immediately" follow Sue Guevara still?
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February 12th, 2009 at 7:02 am
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February 12th, 2009 at 7:46 am
I'm a Michigan State fan. I could care less what goes on at U of M.
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February 12th, 2009 at 7:59 am
Brooke Heike said she fell out of favor with coach Sue Guevara immediately after Guevara was hired in 2007.
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February 12th, 2009 at 8:42 am
Brooke Heike stated, "I fell out of favor with coach Sue Guevara in 2007, immediately after she was hired."
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February 12th, 2009 at 8:48 am
Brooke Heike said she immediately fell out of favor with Sue Guevara after the U of Michigan hired the coach in 2007.
Can "immediately" follow Sue Guevara still?
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